|Reviews for Breakdown|
| To M From the author chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Meh, M. Meh.
| Me chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
You told me to review. I am doing a great kindness here.
| Hopeful-Future chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
The two lines
"And I'm using 'and'
Way too much."
works as a great little break in the middle of this anxiety attack of a poem. I think that for an unpolished poem, you did a great job.
| True Talker chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Okay, are you okay? Seriously. Do you want to talk? Yes, I am asking.