Reviews for Breakdown
To M From the author chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Meh, M. Meh.
Me chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
You told me to review. I am doing a great kindness here.

Hehe. JK.

Hopeful-Future chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
The two lines

"And I'm using 'and'

Way too much."

works as a great little break in the middle of this anxiety attack of a poem. I think that for an unpolished poem, you did a great job.
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Okay, are you okay? Seriously. Do you want to talk? Yes, I am asking.