This is beautiful, achingly beautiful. I am looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope you will revisit Sophie and Kate in the future. They are lovely. I really like the back and forth between leading and following, too. It's a perfect mix.

Do you know how beautiful this chapter was? My God was it well written, and it had me aching for more as each word was read. Your writing is amazing. I swear, I could feel the tension between the two as the dance went on, and just the way you described how their limbs intertwined and the erratic pulsing of the blood Kate felt, gosh it was passionate. It's like your writing pushed past all the fluffy words, and hit straight to the core and then some.

Please continue writing this, I just can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks for the upload!

Wow, I love it already! Sophie seems like a sweetheart regardless of her choice of dress, and Annabelle reminds me of little girls I used to play with when I was younger.I can't wait for more, because honestly, I love the French language, and I love to dance even though I'm terrible at it too!

Wonderful first chapter love!