Reviews for The Diary of Jane
Kristian chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I think that this story has so much in so few words! You could/should extend this into a full blown novel.
GoldLemon12 chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
The Diary of Jane.

This is a good song, by breaking Benjamin. Fittingly enough my name is Benjamin.

I liked your story, although I have a differnt take on it.

Rather than walking away from the diary, and following the social conditioning of fear.

There is a deeper sub - conscious urge in us, that wants to be immortalized by the mythic allure of the vampires bite.

Christianity, would be disguested, by cematary's, death and decay.

There is another perspective where in our dreaming awareness, we each want the diary of jane. We want the morbid, for that is where we go beyond the fear of oursevles.

It is where we find, our immortality.

I think you have tapped into a universal vien with this, if you go deeper, into the vampires perspective, (or your sub - conscious)

I think you might find an even deeper meaning to this.


Ditto123 chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
It'd be cool if you continued this
katyperryfan chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
There is so much desricption in this story. Not much diologue, but who cares. Graham is obessed with Jane, to bad she turned out to be a loser