Reviews for Car Ride
Pickingupthepieces chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
It's amazing, and totally true.

It was what I did when Mrs Fong was all like, "No, you may not use your mobile phones."

But I prefer going slow through the countryside. Not that we even have one here :D

Which is why I resort to stories.

I like the whole rhyme/slant rhyme/rhyme/slant rhyme thing.

It's nice.
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
I like this piece. I never thought of writing about a car ride, now i'm wishing I had. Very inspiring and has a huge wow factor. Keep writing!