Reviews for Sweet and Sour |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story discontinued? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really can't get enough of this story. The pacing and character development is great. On one hand, I feel sympathy for Iggy. Getting angry, with the force that is placed upon him to be "normal." But, then quirky characters like Leslie and Mell, provide that comedic or gentle reprieve with the protagonist's tenser moments. More than anything thing though, is the way you build up Darren's character. Initially showing up as stoic and rough, but with his gestures: waking Iggy up in the morning, the glass of water, helping him in general, as well as taking an interest in Iggy's life. well, I cannot commend you anymore on the character development. Your writing speaks in volumes. Tone, character, pacing, and diction. just perfect. I really hope to see more of this story. It's beautifully pen'd and I can't get enough of it. Please continue. Noir Noir |
![]() ![]() Finally! I've been missing this story! Love it , love it3 I hope we don't have to wait for next chapter as long as the last one ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just picked this up and I like it. Haha I can tell that you've probably included some of your fandoms into here too, right I love Loki and manga/anime too. What guy does Iggy want to cosplay as? Mel seems awesome and I'm starting to get attached to Darren too! Keep the updates coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So stoked to see an update for this story. Nicely done too. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens at the dance and hopefully learning more about Darren. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must have more! please update soon...I hope Darren and Iggy get together at the dance |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello update! Glad to see this story continuing. This dance could be interesting. I would to know more about Derren's past. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, I was glad to see another chapter! I look forward to seeing more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yesssss! You did update! I really wanna see how Iggy and Darren's relationship evolves. Update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() TTnTT but-but...it was such an Iggy moment! *sigh* why can't Iggy see Darren wuvs him? Its obvious he does, or is starting to. PLEASE CONTINIE ALL YOIR WONDERFUL STORIES! 3 id say i wuv u but that to creepy, so im just going to follow you...in a non-creepu way - |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is really amazing and it keeps you to the edge of your seat...i am always wondering what will happen next so i am never bored...i really like the way you write and the way the relationships between the characters developed,especially iggy and darren and iggy and mel...please continue the story and upload the next chapter soon...i really want to know more about their pasts especially iggy's so please don't drop the project and update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Slowly Iggy is opening up... I wonder about Darren's story. Fire? Well, I look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is more right? You plan on continuing this right? -bats eyelashes- pretty please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really interested to see what happens next! I hope you continue writing this :) I love your characters! I'm very curious about what made Darren the way he is... And poor Iggy :( But this story line is great, it's very well developed. I really like how you don't give away too much and keep the reader interested by hinting at things; it's excellent! Please update soon! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story, I like that unlike a lot of other stories on here it has elements of realism and you could believe that Iggy is a real person. I don't know if you get what I mean but I really think it's awesome. ] |