Wasn't *quite* able to finish it before the song finished...

I was wondering the whole way through how time travel would be involved, and whether it would end with any sort of hook or cliffhanger (I've often found that there's a certain type of story that spends a long time meandering around and ends the first chapter without much advancement of the plot.) But here, it looks like it's just starting to get interesting.

I like the style of the prose in general, how it starts off quiet and contemplative, without much dialogue, and then ramps up the excitement up until the end.