Reviews for Ace of Hearts
SDee chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
Carly Clay Pebble-Stone - Now where did I hear that name before?

Is the author of this story only 14? Good story.
dreamingdifferently chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
Awesome -
m mahone chapter 2 . 2/3/2012
great chapter a couple of screw ups but other than that amazing!
m mahone chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
awesome keep writing i love it!
Lisa chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I really enjoyed it! I knew you could write a story that's exciting and keeps you wanting more without having witches or other "special powers" attached to your characters. Looking forward to see how you'll write this love story with that touch of humor that makes it your style. Keep up the good work!
SDee chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Pretty good...Actually, I love it! You set the scene, the reader feels for Olivia but wonders how she got dumped off. (Thats good because it leads the reader to want the next chapter) Quickly we get to know Olivia. (pretty name)

This book has the determination of a girl, but no super powers, so it is a first for the author, although I love the karate, protector spin. Do your chapter layout for the book and have each chapter suck the reader into the story, just like this one did. Good Luck and Keep Going!
gilraenstar chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
ooooooooooooh! johnnyboy is JEALOUS! You get to SPEND THE NIGHT (winkwink) at another boys house ;D

lol wow XD hahahahahahahaha
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