|Reviews for bad timing|
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
well written. this contains so much emotion and i relate to it very much. great job
| It's I who promised 10 reviews chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
HELL ARE YOU! - my fave line!
I can imagine you saying that! :p
I really liked this poem,there's a spelling error though.
But you're one of those awesome people so when you make a spelling error, it only makes you look more awesome. LOL!
(P.S. 6 more to go!)
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
repeat everything eleven said, times 90. especially "i'm bleeding unrequited / love". perfect line break.
| becquerel chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
for some reason, the line "i'm bleeding unrequited" even without the "love" part in the next line is just really... spectacular. idek.
anywhore, this is beautiful in you should feel beautiful. good luck with the object of your affections, assuming this and that other one you just posted are based on real stuff, and stuff. c;