Reviews for Lingering
NickB730 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
This was great i love the descriptiveness in your peace, i really understood how the protagonist was feeling. I also love the unexpected transformation from a sad tone to a content one. I give your piece a 9.8/10 stars. Don't forget to check out my piece, "The Autobiography of Sasha Fierce". It is a fictional account of Beyonce's alter ego and how she came to be.