Reviews for The Peacemaker
YasuRan chapter 4 . 1/16/2012
An interesting concept to work with. I find that it ties in very well on all levels: the pieces the story is divided into, the fragments of information we come to learn about the Cathy, and the 'peace'maker herself. I like how you tied everything together, connecting these seemingly unrelated incidents with drops of revelations scattered about.

The third and fourth pieces were the ones I found most interesting. Perfect comparisons between Cathy's experience - the silent, helpless observer - and Sandy - the grieving sister. What with all that's happened between these two chapters, I hope you can add more to this sad tale. It's got loads of potential as a multi-chap.

Keep up the good work!