|Reviews for Shadow and Flame|
| Do Play With Fire chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Good writing, although adding more of a background, like who the council exactly is and why Rebecca is an enemy to them would have been nice.
| Neurotic Meanderings chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
I like it, except it's right up my alley so maybe that's why. That and you write really well.
In the third block, I believe, he uses binoculars. In a world with three moons, magiks and golems's I guess that sounded a bit mundane. Small I know, but a quirky detail.
I love how you put this work together. I've only just started coming to the site (and posted my very first story)but this placed is full of great things to read.