|Reviews for Kidnapped|
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/4/2012
Is that the last chapter? I didn't get the ending! what will happen later? getting married or not? please explode more.. I really liked this story, I don't want it to end with a really unclear ending else I will be rolling my mind all the time searching for unanswered questions... you know.
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/28/2012
Amazing story, I love your writing. Keep it up.
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/28/2012
when will you post the last chapter? If allowed.
| sanguine eyes chapter 18 . 6/28/2012
Yeah! Summer, Alex and Jeremy are finally leaving! :)
P.S. This is WordsxOfxWisdom; I just changed my penname.
| Boreeeed chapter 5 . 6/10/2012
Oops, I wanna say the review below me that I posted befor, was for chapters 1-5, but I didn't know I was on chapter 6 when I posted the review. So, the review has nothing to do with chapter 6.
| Boreeeed chapter 6 . 6/10/2012
I liked the premise. It's interesting. There are two problems I have with it though.
1. You have to be more descriptive. So far, I have no idea who anyone looks like. And, I have no idea the environment they are in.
2. Make it more realistic. I find it hard to belive that summer is in already in good terms with Alex, like he didn't partically rape her. I understand that she would go along with him, so he wouldn't hurt her, but she doesn't seem to show that or show any hatred or disgust for him that would make me believe it was all an act. Plus, the way she acted all normal with David, even though it was for revenge, I still didn't think she would be friends or be nice with someone who kidnapped her just a day ago, and again, nothing makes me think it was an act or for revenge, until the charater up and said it.
But, execpt for those two problems, this story has alot of potential.
| absenthium chapter 5 . 5/27/2012
Again "softly" is repeated throughout the chapter hehe. I find your writing flows pretty well anyway and the 1st person certainly draws you in better than the 3rd person narrator
| absenthium chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
I found you used "softly" a lot, you should cut down on adverbs in my opinion. I have noticed this chapter is written in first person whereas the previous one in 3rd person, that is slightly confusing. The story is intriguing me anyway, I'm gonna read on
| sanguine eyes chapter 13 . 5/19/2012
Oh! Summer had her baby! It sucks, though, what happened with the delivery and all. I can't even begin to imagine...
Well, I hope you have a name picked for that baby boy :)
| sanguine eyes chapter 6 . 3/12/2012
Somehow, I am really, really enjoying this story :3
| AnonymousPen chapter 5 . 3/1/2012
I'm enjoying the story. :)
Especially the switching of perspectives, that's definately what drew me in. Maybe add some more POV's of different characters.
Keep up teh great work, it's gonna be awesome seeing more of this plot.
| WritingObsessed32 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
this seems like a very interesting story so far. My only suggestion would be to describe the characters' appearcances, and their surroundings in more detail. other than that, its really good. I'd love to read more, please please please write more chapters! :D
| firefox vixen chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
I wonder what happens next!:)