Reviews for Adventures in Time Traveling |
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STARLIGHT2267 chapter 4 . 5/29/2012 i like it good job |
happygoluckyfull chapter 3 . 5/11/2012 Hey, this is really good! please keep it up! :D |
Dhallen chapter 3 . 3/18/2012 oh please update more! |
Le Serafines chapter 3 . 2/7/2012 You danced the whole time? I would've gotten tired. "Six feet under..." I love that expression, I use it constantly. Like how you're using actual historical events, and not going and free writing... ~SS P.S: Make something dramatic happen! ? I read a story like that, and reviewing brought it back, do the same? |
Le Serafines chapter 2 . 2/7/2012 Romance! There is it, right in the second chapter... Great job! See? Job, not attempt. It means it's a success! Feel happy. ~SS |
Le Serafines chapter 1 . 2/7/2012 Guess who it is ? One thing - Wouldn't she know roughly where she was, because they'd either be speaking French, or English with a French accent. ~SS |
General Frayia Toll chapter 2 . 1/20/2012 CONTINUE PLEASE! :D |
xwintergirlx chapter 2 . 1/20/2012 I'm really liking this so far. The only suggestion I would have would be to make the chapters a bit longer. |
xwintergirlx chapter 1 . 1/20/2012 Interesting! |
Chelsea Smile chapter 2 . 1/20/2012 So far I like it but at some points it goes a little fast to me. Other than that a wonderful beginning. |