|Reviews for The Devil Walks Into A Bar|
| Villian chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
It's a shame something like this doesn't have more reviews, but I'm the type of person who enjoys stories about demons. This was very good and I love your own interpretation on demons, angels, heaven, hell, etc . I never thought about it in that sense. I have to say I really love the part at the end, he gave him his wish and made it a death sentence (metaphorically). It stays true to a demon's nature to cross you when you ask a favor of them.
| NizumiBreathes chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
I like this story, especially the idea behind this.
But you have some mistakes in the tense as in:
"...if someone was trying to tear it apart. The ground cracks before Paul's..."
You switch from past to present; you have that a few times, but you can easily fix that. )
Oh, and I love the part where the demon says, "Would you like a brain, Scarecrow?" XD
And, last but not least, I like the ending. o-o
Good job. -