Reviews for Peace
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Didn't expect the change in direction- nice! I enjoyed the contrasts- and "how we cope" was a strong end.
D. S. Eden chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
It's a fine poem, although I would personally disagree with peace being fake. As it's my opinion, you don't have to change it but it's something you can think about.