|Reviews for The Reform Subject|
| Dbnichols chapter 18 . 1/25/2015
| Ms.WriterFreak chapter 18 . 7/20/2014
Please Please give us a sequel I love your story please please!
| Adina chapter 18 . 7/18/2014
The mystery behind his business ventures were not answered. It seems like the only resolve here was with Elsa but regarding other things like his father or the business, nothing came out of it.
| EllySky chapter 18 . 6/24/2014
Aww What a lovely story xxx
| Brightheart chapter 18 . 6/22/2014
I enjoyed this story!
| PenguinLover33 chapter 18 . 1/5/2014
This is great
| PaintedPicture chapter 18 . 11/1/2013
I genuinely liked your story, not to sound like a literary snob, but most stories I don't think twice about if they're less than 100k word count, I'm glad I got out of that because this was a good story to read.
Your grammar was great, I noticed one or two errors, nothing that stood out greatly which is always a good encouragement for me to keep reading. This wasn't a story I wanted to skip to the last chapter and find out what happened in the end, I wanted to read the whole thing, I'm severely impatient, recently I've found myself more impatient with stories and wanting to get to the end quicker.
So thank you for the intriguing read, I would have loved to see the way he reacts to Elsa's parents though, that would be interesting. And to see what he was like if they had a kid and over his fear. Or if he ditched her as soon as they had sex saying that revenge was paid back in full. And Dastan gets back earlier than his year, hears the whole story, reads the article and sides with her for him being such an asshole to her. Then when he comes to visit Dastan, realizes that he's staying with Elsa and goes there to find a pregnant ex-girlfriend who has that pregnancy glow but looks worn out and tired and can't even be bothered with being mad at him until he starts accusing her of getting slutty after he left. Even though Raiden still loves and cares about her not being able to put his pride aside, now that he has formed a better relationship and approval from his father or something decided to give her up for that until he realizes that she's carrying his baby, even though she doesn't tell him and its Dastan who spills. Okay I'm rambling. Sorry :P
in a way I feel as if there were many loose ends. We didn't find out much about either family except that they were opposite of each other.
But yes, that's how good of a story you wrote, I'm tantalizingly enthralled at the idea of a continuance
| AlanisBRAVO chapter 18 . 8/1/2013
I loved this story , especially the ending
| spUNkyORanGE chapter 18 . 7/25/2013
I really enjoyed this story and the characters you created. I think the end was way too rushed though. In one chapter they go from not talking to getting together. With how they both were the entire story, it was a little unbelievable. For me, there was too much buildup and not enough outcome. I hope you write another one to continue this story. Keep up the good work.
| jennielove chapter 18 . 7/14/2013
oh my god! that was awesome. i really enjoyed reading this.I almost cried at Raiden's confession in the last chapter. pleaseee write a sequel.
| Gentlewater chapter 18 . 7/11/2013
As much as i love the story i feel like it didn't end there. It would be great if you can make a sequel.
| Gentlewater chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
Im so loving this!
| Gothic-innocence16 chapter 18 . 7/1/2013
Whoa this was a nice way to end this story. Kool
| Alex chapter 18 . 7/1/2013
This Is a story that is fine as it is.
But i'd still love to see a sequel about her getting pregnant just to see how they handled it. And I want to know what happened with Dastan!
| the vcg chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
I really liked your story, thanks for sharing!