|Reviews for Imperfectly Perfect|
| Fainting In Coils chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Nice poem. I like that it's dark without veering into cliche, and the last stanza (especially the last two lines) is really great. The only part I'm iffy on is the line "taught you how to love and raise." It's not that there's anything wrong with it per se, I simply don't quite understand what the 'raise' is referring to. Anyway, good job, and keep up the good work!
| saamf 44 chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Wow it's been so long since I've read one of your poems. I think the story and suspense were descriptive (and emotional). This poem reminds me (or is.. I'm not very good with my genres) of Gothic literature, but I like the twist in the last 2 lines.