| Reviews for Dominance |
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  Ducky chapter 1 . 2/3/2012 So good so far. I hope you keep on going! |
| Anastasia chapter 1 . 1/25/2012 OMG Layne! You have PURE talent! I will be SHOCKED it you don't win this contest. Plz plz keep posting...I need to know what happens next! What will Zacks Master do to him? Gaaaaaagghhhh! Can't wait! :D |
| Cheesy chapter 1 . 1/23/2012 Very intriguing and suspenseful. I really want to know what happens next! Keep writing and I hope you win the contest! |
| Sydney chapter 1 . 1/22/2012 This is soo good layne! Keep on writing it! It's a very good idea |