good again :P and we know Mason has liked her for a long time! keep it up :)

Great chapter.

Oh Morgan... oh poor unconfident Morgan... I'm starting to get the feeling that she needs a self-esteem booster some time soon...

Overall, though, I liked the chapter. I would expect Morgan's father's reaction to be slightly more stern (maybe because that's how I imagine all fathers in the world?), but I loved how he reacted nevertheless. The chemistry between Morgan and Mason is done pretty well, and I'm really interested in see how you're going to advance this plot.

Can't wait for your next update!

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another good chapter! :) keep it up!

It's pretty good, a little contrived but I still want to see more.

aww this is cute,

if he does something bad to her i will kill him

please update soon

I am very curious where this story gonna goes. Hehe. :P

Really good!Please continue!

Great story so far! I was sad when I got done reading all the chapters because I want more :3

"she will hunt people down and throw rocks at your window. And not those cliché Romeo-to-Juliet rocks. No. Giant boulders that smash windows." haha. You make me laugh, and I'm enjoying this so far. I'll read the next chapter and you better update soon!

This story is sooooi good. I love how you describe things and Mason seems really cool. The main character is nice too it would be severely annoying for a person to do that.

Very humorous chapter. I seriously felt like laughing so much while reading most of it. The dynamics between Morgan and Mason are just a joy to read. I like what you've done with Morgan's narration, since she's just like a regular high school teenager (living through the daily hardships of homework, classes, and substitute teachers). She's a character you can relate to and that makes the story enjoyable to read.

Somehow, I feel like this story is going to become one of those guilty pleasures for me.

Thanks for the interesting read.

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This story definitely does have potential. I wasn't too sure that I would like it at first (since I usually don't read stories like this... though I do watch a lot of movies in the similar genre), but the beginning has gotten me interested.

You did pretty well with your narration. The descriptions, the conversation, the internal thoughts - all flowed well together. The humor was also pretty fun, too, and it kind of brought a smile onto my face.

I'm not sure where this story is heading, but this first chapter has definitely intrigued me.

Thanks for sharing this story!

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This is actually awesome. Love the story line though although it sounds cliche but who doesn't love cliche stories anyway. But you did a good job. I laugh all the way, the jokes was too cute. :)

Another good chapter! I think it has some great potential :) I was a little confused at first, when Alice and Morgan were talking in the morning but I could understand it enough :P keep it up!

I like it, it has potential. Good Job.