Reviews for Moving On
SiahXSiren chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Loved it.

The natural imagery made me feel like it was time that was doing the healing, as time does. With the breaking of a new dawn n that.

First stanza created a genuine sense of brokeness yet the second felt so genuinely bright. Hard to create that contrast successfully in a poem so great job.

Then the last line pointed us back in the direction of reality from the abstract. Great stuff
kaihil lover chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Ah, if only it was this easy. *sigh* Getting back up, that is, but we all have to, and we all eventually do. :) And you've portrayed such a person, one who's going through it's feelings in a very beautiful way.

I really like this line, "The stars were brighter this time" Mar, you're amazing. :)
Punslinger chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Maybe not quite the greatest, but you expressed it very well.

Life is an endless series of challenges and small defeats, but the greatest victory is being able to keep going.
askingalexandria908 chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
I love it! I love the wording and it has such a great meaning! Good job! :)