Reviews for So Smile
SiahXSiren chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
I think Love is the right theme after all a lot of needs come from a lack of the genuine stuff & it can be really hard to find. Beautiful poem. Felt open n honest. First two expectations weren't even big ones.

Think everyone has been there / can relate
kaihil lover chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Expectations, is a word which well describes the poem very well. Expectations that will prolly never come true. Very bitter sweet. I feel very bitter sweet. 3 days of school left. A weird pang in my heart, i wanna go to school tomorrow and just stay there, for time to stop and for us to all get stuck there, eternal life in 10-C.

Love the first ray of sunshine part. So adorable and KaiHil-ish. Sort of feels Kai point of view-ish. *grins*

Loved it.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Since you asked for the truth, I hate it.


Actually, I like it very much. Especially the verse about the gold-pot. That should make readers smile. I did. The love theme is just right and easy to relate to. All the XXX in the sign-off are nice, if they don't make us too dizzy.