Reviews for Slave
killMeN0w chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
This. Was. Amazing. ABSOLUTELY amazing...I love the contradiction in the poem...every line had one, especially in the end. I liked these lines the most:

Your sinful pleasure feeds my greed,

You command a deep lust within me,

The entire poem gives the concept about an abusive relationship, I guess. Right? Or a relationship in which one person is dominant, and the other can't help but be just helpless...But sometimes, it's hard to let go, cuz with every pain comes pleasure. I like the way you captured the idea...:) Nice work...:)