Reviews for What Ever Happened to Just Friends? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pleeeease please please please please please update soon. I need to know what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww.. the story was almost over and you stopped updateing it? I wish to read more of it! Please? I liked this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great story! Hope you'll update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() BEST FRIEND OF COURSE |
![]() ![]() CHRIS SHE SHOULD PICK CHRIS I love this story, please update! 3 but yeah, SHE SHOULD PICK CHRIS |
![]() ![]() Whatever answer gets Chris and Nichole together sooner! I really like this story by the way! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want to say you hooked me with this story and that she... I don't know but I know I want her with Chris. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cliff-hanger! alert! beep-beep... tell us whts next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HALO BUDDY! Write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad u update... looking for the next update... nice story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story. There's a couple of grammar mistakes and shit, I suggest that you proof read your chapters before posting it. :) But yeah, good story (Y) Oh and try idk, giving the story more... how do I put it? More depth? Like try explaining feelings and stuff better :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. It's really nice. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Try to vary more in sentance structure. :) but i like the storyline a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() too much of this chapter was taken up by lyrics |