Reviews for Left Behind
Abbytjie chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
From the moment I read your review, my first words were 'So true!'.
Anyways - to the story.
So sweet and, again, so true. I love how he/she (not sure from which perspective you wrote this, but that's ok because that doesn't matter) says it's their job, they have to be strong for their father. It's really sweet and escellent. Another amazing story from such an amazing author.
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I thought "cynicism upon my father" was a little confusing. You're cynical of your father or he's cynical of your loss? The last line captured not having a shoulder to cry upon perfectly- the detail of turning out the light lets us know she's not coming back and the narrator is shouldering the burden.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Brilliant, really loved it! The last line is so heart breaking! Brilliant piece!