|Reviews for The Burning Sun|
| Interest chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Hey, I'm really like the start to this! It sounds like a really interesting story. I've never read about an albino before, and this should be fun.
One note on your writing, it's a little formal. The way they are speaking to each other, I mean. Most people wouldn't go to the trouble to say something like: "I don't know that I've ever met someone with the same taste as me in books, but I can't really say that I know that to be fact."
That's not to say your first chapter isn't great though, because it is, and I look forward to more! Just my little constructive criticism. I can't wait for your next installment!