|Reviews for A dream|
| RedWineAndAmbien chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Your poems always remind me of something! This one reminded me of TS Elliot's poem, "The Hollow Men"...we read it in English. It's an amazing poem, and a verse of it goes like this:
Shape without form, shade without colour
Paralysed force, gesture without motion
Contradiction is the word I'm looking for. There's a lot of contradiction here, just as in Hollow Men...and it's sorta similar. To me, there's a unique little beauty to that, contradiction I mean, and it explains stuff a lot more, though its confusing but I love it, anyways. I'm glad you did that. And you're good at it. I'd like to see you do more of that, cuz I enjoyed what you put there...
One more thing, the poem on the whole was about running without a reason, and it seemed vague at points but I love vagueness too...There's a beauty to vaguness, as well...;p. I never write a poem myself, without being vague so I'm gonna applaud you for that...
Nice job and...of course, do keep it up...;p