Reviews for Tides |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting. I like it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made me laugh! Oh my god! "And tapping Unicorns that can shit out rainbows!" LOL! I found some grammatical errors. Everyone has those. When your talking about a number of things, it's Two not To. I just wanted to clarify that. Overall, nicely done! I wanted to start a story kinda like that, but thought it sounded too... Percy Jackson and the Olympians. You did this nicely, and I give you a A! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start with the story, can't wait to see what happens next! :D |