this was brilliant absolutely loved it the story was brilliant and I loved the characters and they way they bonded and got together amazing well done :)

This story was awesome and soo well written! Can't wait to red the sequel!

asdfghjkl; That sequel better be soon or I will die. I am too in love with this. It isn't supposed to end noooow. /3

Oh God I looooved this story I only read a little every night I didn't want it to end its amazing. It's cute and cliche but in a unique and fun way... I love it!

You did a great job on this story, and I totally fell in love with it so thanks a lot for writing it. :)

I'm soooooo jealous of her hair lol. I'm not allowed to do mine that way -.-

Ooo k thnx.

OMG i love this story, its my fav!

Well thank god there will be a sequel. In actuallity, I felt like you just kind of let it end without really ending it. Don't get me wrong; it's still very good! But there are still a few loose ends? Like what was up with Wim? I got bad vibes off him the entire time, and he didn't do anything, so I'm concerned and exited for the sequel. Anywho, great - short - chapter, and I await the sequel!

Hey,

So, I know you're going to wipe this story off from this site soon, for publishing reasons, and I am rushing to complete it, but I may just buy it - because it's kind of, a little cool ;)

Anyways, what got me totally excited was your Author's note on top - talking about your mum and Geneva and all that. I went to boarding school in Switzerland before I bundled my way to England (yes, my parents hate me and want to get rid of me - jokes) for boarding school... AND, I went to school in Lausanne, which is like 30 minutes away from Geneva. And I know this connection thing is a bit extended in the sense that I didn't go to school in Geneva, and it was your mum who went and all that, but I got excited nonetheless. I am sadly one of those (those who get easily excited).

ANYHOO, great story. I hope you continue writing - you're amazing! xx

that is a bad ending if you end it like that their should at least be an epilogue unless theirs a sequel and what about sage or kait and that guy? nice plot good story(other than the ending). :)

Youre getting your story published! Like it will be a book! Congratulations! I absolutely LOVED it!

You have grown a lot as an author through this story. It's getting that good, strong base down and becoming an accomplished author that matters. I can't wait to see your other works now that this is over. You definite the characters so well; the sweet, sharp edges of Roman and Thea's intellectual side. This story is sculpted beautifully and I will surely read the sequel. Good luck!

And, do you do NaNoWriMo?

Well done.

Beautiful last chapter. really beautiful. can you post another chapter on this story when you start the sequel?