Reviews for Cerberus
kinichiPrincessOfTheDark chapter 4 . 7/30/2013
I adore this story. Completely, it's amazing realistic nail biting and enteraining.
toolazytologin chapter 16 . 6/22/2013
good idea fora story, but the way the mom is suddenly super nice is bizzare, also what doctor would recommend that for a child? is Cerberus educated even though he's in the basement? how did the brother get to be this way? if the grandfather was a doctor how come he didn't know there was nothing wrong with Cerberus. the problem with the story is that it lacks too many details and it speeds through events like wills real recovery process that should have been longer... like I said I liked it, but it needs allot of work
TheGhostChild chapter 8 . 6/21/2013
Either I watch too many Criminal Minds episodes or.. I'm crazy.
Is Dameon actually the real Cerberus? Like.. did he pull a "Man in the Iron Mask" and scare his mom into switching the boy's places?
Damn. Sounds like.. Dameon rules the house and Cerberus is led to believe he's this awful kid when he's really not.
AAAAH. Can't wait to
misspelledideas chapter 14 . 6/19/2013
OMG Dameon... I've been wondering, how did Cerberus learn that he was the product of rape. It doesn't seem in the cards for Dameon to tell him.
misspelledideas chapter 9 . 6/19/2013
I am a little confused by the context. I think that William should have been a little more freaked out by the appearance of Cerberus' brother, if what he is telling is true. But the context is very interesting, off to read more!
misspelledideas chapter 8 . 6/19/2013
This family... woah...
misspelledideas chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
misspelledideas chapter 2 . 6/19/2013
Oh my gosh... I like how you are not immediately jumping into thhe romance.
misspelledideas chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
This is really cool, I'm wondering where you are going with this
janichan143 chapter 16 . 6/5/2013
How about leave this story and state in your new story that it isa different version of this one. Then ask your reading how tgry like and so on.
The Games Poker chapter 3 . 4/8/2012
ok so i love it please continue
dr3 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Heart aches :g already...
kiki19857 chapter 11 . 2/13/2012
"I could tell she (his mother) was worried about her son"?

How could it be when she locked her son in the basement?
einekleineschreiberin chapter 10 . 2/7/2012
I just wish the chapters were longer and there wasn't as many authors notes. It just makes the chapters shorter. But I love the plot twist! Though I sort of expected...
True Talker chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
So, yes this is fiction and my own personal thoughts a person shouldn't be held accountable after being born in that situation because they weren't even born yet and they had NO part in that action. If the person is brought up with love and real love then the person will ONLY know of love and real love and that is the way that I feel about this.

This is written quite well and obviously there are sad parts about it really a lot of sadness in it. Feel free to continue if you have the time if you do I would like to see which direction that you decide to take with this.

Thank you for sharing this with everyone. I am picking everything because of my curiosity/interest in this story.
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