|Reviews for The Girl is Mine|
| Fas38 chapter 1 . 3/1
Come on ... plz update it ...
like the story ... :-)
| Somebody chapter 33 . 2/17
Aww zane is jealous! That's so cute! But wow I did not see Gabe's bisexuality coming ;) This chapter was amazing as usual... Keep updating!
| mememe chapter 33 . 2/10
Hi! Thank you sooo much for updating. It sure took a while! Thanks anyhow. There is this one phrase in your writing that seems a bit off. "Different than (whoever), ..." it seems a bit weird and off to me. Maybe u can us "Unlike (whoever),..." im just saying! :) keep up the great story!
| clumsyhead chapter 33 . 2/10
Ooh welcome back...,I liked todays chapter but I would have prefered Zane pov while he was jealous it would have been so much better but nonetheless I loved that you updated this chapter,thank you...do write again :) :)
| Guest chapter 33 . 2/9
Wait , is Gabe actually up to something or wha
| Dwarfperson chapter 33 . 2/9
Yay! New chapter! I loved it - especially the jealous bit, Zane is too cute;3
Pleeeease update soon? I actually love this story so much, if it were published I would buy it and read it again and again and again :)
| SomethigNice chapter 33 . 2/11
One of the best chapters, you always surprise me with something and this is a really good thing. But please update sooner because if there is a long amount of time between posts then we can forget some details or just get out of the story mood. Nice work anyway, keep doing it!
| Keywill chapter 33 . 2/11
I love this story hope you keep going with it
| Stunnamac chapter 33 . 2/9
I loved this chapter! It was cute seeing Zane jealous and Gabe being bi or confused or was definitely a twist! I think he's definitely gay though lol! Btw, there was a continuity error with Sam. At first, you wrote Rick and the all of a sudden his name changed to Sam. Sorry if I'm being annoying, I just wanted to let you know.
| clumsyhead chapter 1 . 2/4
Okay I seriously tried a lot not to review thinking you are busy in your life but please consider us tooo..:( I seriously check this story everytime I get time and you haven't updated for so long PLEAse update sooooon
| MEMEME chapter 1 . 2/1
do you know how many times i check fictionpress a day just to see if you update? ABOUT A MILLION -CRIES-. i love this story, please update soon! YOU DO NOT LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT! i really hope you update, this is the best story i've seen on fictionpress!
| memememe chapter 32 . 1/25
Where are you? Update SOON! PWEASE :3
| clumsyhead chapter 32 . 1/16
I like this Zane so much more...wow hope you update Sooon...:)
| memememe chapter 32 . 1/11
| Colie Rae chapter 32 . 1/13
Goodness I love this story! There are quite a few typos and grammar issues and wrong names or words placed in or inconsistencies in descriptions but the plot is wonderful. I was fully expecting her to hop the fence to help him and then get kidnapped while they're both trapped inside. I'm pleasantly surprised that didn't happen. I do love the story and think it has a lot of good things going for it. It seems that you planned ahead well, with subtle hints in earlier chapters relating to later chapters. I do hope you update soon!