Reviews for Girls, Boys, and Other Enigmas
AboutHer chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Well, wasn't that cute! This kinda reminded me of a Sarah Dessen novel, only Jill is much more quirky (in a good way!). Great job!
4 me chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
I absolutely love this story! (and you) Jill is a refreshing story. She is not childish just childlike. She is in no hurry to grow up, keeps in root to the morals that cartoons and parents taught her. She is one of those people that stand out, she's unique from all the other girls that are in such a rush to have sex and be 'mature' (like Carlee) they don't seem ton understand her so she's deemed as "annoying" she is humorous and awkward, she's loveable. Unlike a lot of the female characters in stories with similar plots (an unpopular girl gets the popular boy), Jill obtains qualities that makes I obvious to me (and other readers) why Kent fell for her. Other main girl protagonists are insecure, trying to be older, attempts to be like the other girls, goes through makeovers to be more glamorous, and so on. Kent is a dear, he isn't mushy but loves Jill just how she is. He is the one trying to get closer to her, going to her house, going on errands with her, putting her hand in his, etc.
TheBatismyMan chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
This is so awesome. I love how your plot just goes so smoothly it makes everything so WONDERFUL

Chakara1winxclub chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Great story. Write more of these please?
Dominique Diane chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Oh, God! Such a beautiful story! :) love it! Kent!
Minkaos chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Wow. I really really enjoyed your story. Jill and Kent are so lovely together. I also really found Jill's parents super endearing, haha. Can't wait to read more of your work!

Ps. I have a huge thing for flower-boys... lol.
vanadoola chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Damn this was long. But so worth it. Been in need of a really good story lately and this definitely delivered. Seriously loved your story and way of writing! Thank you for helping me procrastinate when I should have been studying :P
cepsdee chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
i love this story... refreshingly modern. I am so absorbed with the characters of the story and I admire the embellishments... i hope to read more from Ms Haps
Princess Mariana chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
This is great!
selahandsong chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I can't stop re-reading this.
It. Is. So. Freaking. Adorable.
Ahh! *squeeaaaaall*

Easily one of my favorites! Well done!
ant0006 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Jill is adorable!

That is all.

Seriously though, I loved this oneshot - I think that it is easily the best one I have ever read :)
Random chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Super sweet, made me "awww".
Love from, some Random
whatdotheydream chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
party enhancers r good 4 u chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
I hate Carlee, but this was so cute.
d-b chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
This is SO CUUUUUTE! *massive squeeee* I love it! It's laugh-out-loud hilarious and sweet and adorable and so satisfyingly fluffy and romantic. *sighs happily* It's perfect. Kent and Jill are just so cute together - as awkward long-time acquaintances, to best friends, to the most adorable couple EVER. Gah, I am helplessly fangirling, but I can't help it, this is one of my favourite oneshots on fictionpress, and I have read a LOT. :P Thank you for writing something so fun and enjoyable! :D
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