Reviews for Girls, Boys, and Other Enigmas
Rufino Cabang chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
This is excellent, and I'm grateful to have read it. Please lose the self-deprecating intro because it prepares people (inaccurately) for something long-winded and rambling; it's not! It is so good - the dialogue sounds both intelligent yet young-adult - what a fine line to straddle and how well it's done here. I was so involved the whole time and rightfully so. It's THAT good.
drats chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Ah wow. this was so awesome. :)
mushed up chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
i love JILLY-BEAN!
skow.grace chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
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Girls, Boys, and Other Enigmas has been nominated for Most Humourous this round, and the nomination of Girls, Boys, and Other Enigmas has been successful.

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The Phoenix Girl chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Awww how sweet! Loved your characters and story! Great work :)
Author-K-J-Lee chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
The over all story is good. The main character is annoying, immature and just plain stupid... I can't see why he likes her o.O.
Be-U-tiful chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Wow this is so amazing! I was literally crackin up every few seconds! I absolutely love love love this!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
ey sexiiiii... just wanted to let u no i love ur story. so good girl. mm. i love it. r u writing a sequel? i need me some more kent in my life ;)
twibbit chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
this is so cute :D
Remy JaNae chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I have to tell you, I simply ADORE this story! I wish it were longer. I actually cried for Jill when Carlee 'dumped' her. I can relate to Jill because I watch only cartoons and avoid reality tv and I hate basements or any other place that's scary (I am 21, will be 22 next month). I LOVE Kent! He didn't speak much in the beginning but that cleaning habit of his is too adorable! So...yea! Loved the story! thank you for writing it! Bye! :3
tripnfallbri chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Wowww. This is adorable and fun! Such a great gem of a story! Jill is adorable in all of her quirkiness. From the way she rambles to her innocence & morals, I feel like I can relate to her. Kent is dreamy and basically the epitome of the perfect man from his amazing cleaning skills to his admirable patience. I absolutely loved how he was always making the first move & reaching out to an obviously completely clueless Jill. All their interactions were hilarious and entertaining.

This was perfect and I look forward to reading more of your writing!
I caught myself chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
OMG that was amazing. I couldn't stop grinning. I love how everything was so awkward for Jill, like she didn't know how to act and was still having trouble growing up. I loved this story thanks very much for sharing it.
morphine and lollipops chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
AHHHHHH this is one of the most adorable stories I have ever read. Jill is adorable, her thoughts are adorable, her parents are adorable, and Kent is super-mega adorable. Absolutely loved it.
cupidgirl xx chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
This is such a good story!
Aniline N chapter 1 . 6/27/2012

I am still in disbelief at how awesome this story is! Seriously, this is probably one of the most under rated stories on FP. It should have a gazillion more reviews that it already has!

It made me laugh, it made me cry, it made me cringe - all the awkward moments Jill got herself in to :P Granted, I loved Jill, mainly because she was so quirky and totally relatable. Kent is such a sweetheart. And Jill's parent's are awesome! I loved how you gave each character their own personality and how you slowly developed them along with the plot.

Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your stories :)
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