Didn't I post a review for this a long time ago? Hmm...and there seems to be a few chapters missing. Or the one I wrote was for the same story on the Garden of Black Roses account.

WOW. I almost can't describe how brilliant this story already is. I love the Latin attacks you put in (which also goes to say that I think you should keep them!), the attacks themselves were great (I can almost *feel* their awesome-ness), and this was very well written; the vivid descriptions the characters, everything! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of this story.