Reviews for Unnamed Story
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
This story is amazing and it is really quite creative, it is a really amazing story. Seriously. Okay, now that I realize that I have always spelled congratulations wrong and I mean always. I really don't feel right doing a critique to someone else's work.

However as asked previously by others I have decided to; Critique; - If you care to throughout your story you have does spelled as dose.

- The 15th line up from the bottom/last line - you have "timing being" it should be - "time being".

- The 2nd line up from the bottom - you have here it should be - "her".

There may be some other errors here and there however it is completely up to you to decide whether you will fix them of not.

Thank you for sharing this amazing story with everyone.