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OMG I just read this part and it is such a cliffhanger please write more!

WOW! Love ur story, plssss update!

WHY DID THAT HAVE TO YOUR LAST UPDATE IN LIKE A YEAR?! TALK ABOUT A CLIFFHANGER upppdate update what happens next? Kinda want Dante to have a happy ending :/

There is no question about it, Dante NEEDS TO DIE! Him and his entire evil army! I do believe Claire has suffered enough in her lifetime and ending up with a heartless prick like Dante would just suck major ass! Damien was there for her when she needed him, on more that one occasion! Dante doesn't get to be Mr. Johnny-Come-Lately and take her from him. Who gives a flying shit if his family conspired to take his birthright from? Damien was not aware of it, so his hatred toward him is rather severely misplaced. Also, if he knew Claire existed all along, why didn't he seek her out and try to protect her like Damien did? Like a true soulmate should? Every choice he has made since he supposedly overheard his parents, has proved that he doesn't deserve to be king and doesn't freaking deserve Claire either! He needs to be gone, PERMANENTLY!

On another note, I do hope she doesn't lose her baby... Again, she has suffered enough. Just make her be with the man she loves and have the family she wants. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update :)

Ah cannot wait for the end!

NOOOOOOO!

ohhhhh CANT WAIT go damien woop woop i hope the babys fine :( i dont want it to die

That's happened to me before, only once. But I got my stories back in a few months(drove me insane!). At least you had the will to re-do things.
As for the story, I like this, for a beginning. Maybe you should've started from the party, something basic and normal. That way you don't jump into the story too fast. I had a huge problem with that.
If you want a beta, or story help(editing, re-reading, etc.) I have plenty of free time. Just PM me. I'd love to help.
Keep up your writing.

Omg you haven't update in four months, please update soon can't wait to find out who Claire decides to stay with Damien or Dante, so please end the waiting, update soon!

She has to be with Damien! I hate Dante! Please have her be with Damien!

I think it would be a great twist if dante was the one actually in her dreams, as that would really split her in half.

You might want to try using a thesaurus for different wording, so your story sound more sophisticated and so you have more flow. Also try more vivider details and being slightly more dramatic. When you are describing something I think you should try having more of a connection with the object of description. Ex.(His eyes we're deep hazel, soothing and searching, as if his eyes were looking into my soul.)I like your plot and character, it seems interesting.

Write for what really matters,

-Devanian

This story is ahhhmazing! I love it so much and man how I feel for Claire