|Reviews for Fearless|
| hirokiri9 chapter 31 . 2/27
Such a beautiful story! I wish more people gave it a try. Can't find anything wrong with this story. Please continue writing!
| hirokiri9 chapter 20 . 2/26
This story deserves so much more reviews. I've been addicted for the past two days! I'm glad I gave this a shot. Perhaps change the summary? May get more traffic. Anyway, keep up the great work! XD
| Shade the Raven chapter 31 . 2/24
No need for excuses. Life has a way of roadblocking us all. So we push through and keep to what we love.
I admit that I think Amber took her father's death very well, but given the setup and backstory, it makes perfect sense. The goodbyes had been said ages ago, this just puts the mortal touch on it. Does that make it right or wrong? Who's to say...
Still, everyone heals in their own way, and I agree with Ross that it's good to see her begin to really smile again. Now to see what waits for them at home.
| CherryBomb337 chapter 31 . 2/4
yay I'm glad you updated, I thought the last chapter was the end. I'm sorry that not enough people read your story. its really good & different from a lot of romance stories I read, and your characters over come a lot of obstacles & have a lot of emotion that other stories don't are kinda cliché. but i'm glad your going to carry on, I'd love to see what happens with ross & amber. maybe they will have babies :D okay back to the review. I feel bad for amber, not getting to really tell her father how she felt for leaving them, how much it still affects her and hopefully her father would of been sorry and explained to her why he did it. I think even if it would of hurt her to hear the reason it would be a relive. i'm glad there going back home, they can finally start their lives. lovely chapter update soon please :D
| Shade the Raven chapter 30 . 10/27/2013
I had guessed that this is how you were going to do Schaefer's death; either this way or right there in the room during their visit for all to see and let Ross see a father's death directly, not just from memory. And Amber's reaction, with such neutral solitude, is very well done for someone who said her real goodbyes a long time ago.
Awesome work! Can't wait for the next one!
| Shade the Raven chapter 29 . 9/15/2013
I personally don't think Erik or Schaefer were rushed at all. Erik certainly came across as the legal-warrior type, doing battle across business tables, and apparently being very good at it. Takes a smart man to be able to do that, so in that respect, I can see what Amber saw.
And for Schaefer, I have no doubt there much more to come with him.
Though somehow I expect something of a verbal throwdown at least between Amber and Isobel. And I doubt it would be as civil as Ross vs Sam, but we'll see.
Looking forward to more!
| rahimahrock chapter 29 . 9/13/2013
Hi. New reader. I really like your story. Well written and developed. Makes me want to surf in the sea. I wish that more people read your story. Last 2 days I couldn't concentrate in class because I was keep wanting to read your story.
| Shade the Raven chapter 28 . 7/27/2013
I was wondering when this was going to come about. The distance that Amber is putting away from Ross, the helplessness he feels in trying to reach out, the isolation in a foreign land...Neville does make an awesome big brother, even if he isn't.
And it doesn't surprise me that Amber had her own little revelation waiting in the wings. Like Ross said, it's just human nature to want to be loved in times of need and lonliness. And he took it well, as I would expect.
All in all, another well written chapter. I'm wondering about the next one about just what this Erik will be...
Great to see you back in action!
| CherryBomb337 chapter 28 . 7/22/2013
lovely surprise to see this pop up at top of my updates :D amber really strong & stubborn knda reminds me of my mom. im glad she doesn't wont to be upset about her father anymore,she just wants closer,& she should just let him have hit,tell him how he felt when he just left,or anything to let that anger out. it will be a big breather once she chapter sad ross felt lonely,but now they can be soon :D
| Shade the Raven chapter 27 . 6/20/2013
It's good to see Ross and Amber back together again, and Ross doing the best possible thing he can do of just bring there for her. I can definitely understand that one.
From a format point of view, it looked good for the most part too, but I did pick up on a few missed words, like "To 'the' hospital." for instance. Minor corrections, no worries.
Glad to see you back in action!
| CherryBomb337 chapter 27 . 6/17/2013
yay you updated! :D
I feel really bad for amber, all this stress that just popped up in her life, its eating away at her. glad ross is there. his unconditional love for amber is really beautiful too read. lovely chapter, update soon
| Shade the Raven chapter 26 . 5/14/2013
You know, I half expected Neville to kiss Ross before he flew. It's that kind of emotion-packed moment and adrenaline that would lead to that. Granted, I can't imagine the complications that would have arisen if he had, so the bromance remains strong with these two, and rightly it should.
And having done this routine of nigh-insane last-minute traveling to meet up with a loved one more than once, I'd say that you also captured that moment of reunion and relief very well also. Just that feeling of when no words can fully tell how wonderful it feels to see them and touch them again...priceless.
Keep up the great work!
| CherryBomb337 chapter 26 . 5/13/2013
i was very excited too to see you updated :D i really wish i had a friend like neville, he's so great, what a true best friend should glad ross finally got to see amber. but what happened to her, is she weak cause of the mess she has to deal with her father, or just weak cause she was separated from ross. and ross is such a sweetheart, i like how much he changed from the beginning to now, fantasic character development. now their finally together. lovely chapter,niall is such a numpty hahaha. update soon :D
| Shade the Raven chapter 25 . 4/26/2013
Huh... that was both the Susanna I expected, and yet one I could not have expected. Seductive and sly, sure. But understanding? Didn't see that coming.
I also understand the root of Sam's problem too. And if there was any room for thought that she and Ross would every be fully on the same side, I think that has been laid to rest. Now to see what awaits him in Vienna.
| CherryBomb337 chapter 25 . 4/22/2013
perfect. its so sad to see ross falling apart. i liked the interraction with sam & susanna,for a minute i was like is her going to sleep with this hag, then i was like no he wouldn't hes too in love with glad he's going to go be with her, cant wait for there reunion.i hope amber is happy to see him, and he doesn't come to find her cheating on him,hahaha that would be too sad. can't wait for next update :D