Reviews for The Unseen Enemy
Juliet Scar chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Hahahhaaa! I didn't realize there was only one chapter for the whole story until I reached the end! I JUST THOUGHT I WAS READING REALLY REALLY SLOWLY! I was like... "wow. FAIL! I have been reading for like, what? Half an hour? And I have only gotten through a tiny part of the page! DAMN. Here, I thought I had a pretty good speed going for me!" I FELT ALL SLOW AND LAZY! Hahaha. I had to review as an anonymous reader since I can't review more than once on a chapter. I want to say... this was a pretty impressive book you've got here. It kept me hooked! The beginning was confusing but I guess you are planning to make it all click in a sequel... IF you decide to write one that is! I really like Ivan! He sounds ADORABLE. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this story! Good job!
Juliet Scar chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I'm only on the first chapter and I am ALREADY in LOVE with this story! I'll review again when I finish the story! I can't believe I'm the first reviewer. HOW THE HECK DO YOU NOT HAVE 1000 REVIEWS? God... I don't even know which way's up any more. It's like this world is ALIEN to me! Hahahhaa... OK. I'm going back to read more now! BYE! :D