Reviews for and unto dust shalt thou
savor those enticing dreams chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
There's a whole lot of writing on this site, and a whole lot of it is really, really poor writing. Not so with this piece. It's fantastic! The imagery is fantastic, the story is really interesting and I love that you play with this idea of "seventeen forever" so well.

Well done.
a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
god, i wanna be like this. i don't really have anything to say, besides that this is beautiful. really, really beautiful.
Lady Riss chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
This was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. My favorite line is: "if you die seventeen like a movie star, i'll keep your secrets for you. and bring them all, weighing my jacket pockets down, to meet you in the afterlife, to release together like fireflies into the night sky." It's just so powerful and the image is great. This was really really well written.

I love it so so much.
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
This was impressive and really very truly quite creative. Wow and it was quite different. Thank you for sharing this with everyone.