|Reviews for The Chronicles of Oliver Qwinn Book 2: Downfall|
| dru83 chapter 14 . 11/24/2012
Hey man, just wanted to say I like what you've got here, keep the chapters coming. I really like this chapter, it's pretty powerful and your writing here is better than in some of your earlier chapters. This chapter is pretty clean of typing/grammar errors, there's a couple, but nothing that disturbs the flow of the story much. Some of your earlier chapters need some editing, but this one is almost perfect. So, anyway it looks good, so keep those chapters coming.
| Van Quatra chapter 8 . 8/14/2012
nice, very nice you updated, can't wait for what happens next. greatness