Reviews for Hansel and Gretel: Vampires in the Dawn
360pages chapter 1 . 7/30
Hmm, this might sound weird, but why not combine all your parts into one giant story. It seems that would help a lot more and be less taxing on the reader.
Gravitation fan chapter 3 . 7/20/2014
Oh my God. What. The. Fuck. That was...a...fucking masterpiece! I have seen them in episode on Black Lagoon and I have read the book (original story) and you were faithful to both versions and to be honest, I really have fucked up mind sometimes so the idea of a dark, and incestuous version of Hansel and Gretel intrigues me. Do more! Make them a little older though I didn't really like them having sex while thinking they're still kids. I may like heterosexual, homosexual, straight and incestuous romance but not when mixed with children. I'm not a pedo. Anyway other than that it was very creative. would Indina Menzel put it...wicked. Do more. Maybe make them adoptive parents and their new reason to kill the evil in the world so their son doesn't become consumed by it like they were. Bye.
crystalita09 chapter 3 . 7/8/2013
luv it!
crystalita09 chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Awesome story!
Cancelled account chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Love it. The plot is great and I read the sequel. You should continue!
TheAlmightyMe chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
Wait, isn't this from Black Lagoon?
Lee Sempai chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
It was so wrong... But so FREAKIN RIGHT! I am glad I am not the only one who writes about incest! I write about hansel and Gretel too! Do read it! This was good!
Lee Sempai chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
o-o That...Was.. AWSOME! Amazing idea! Please update!