|Reviews for Aegis|
| SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
aww! that was so cute:3 well written and thanks for the link!
| Pzychotic chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Lol aegis, I remember that b/c I didn't know that word!
Anyways, very typical & fluffy again, very romantic & yeah XD
It's very well written!
| Me chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Oh. My gosh. This was like toootes amazing! :D
But there were a lot of little errors. PLEASE FIX CUZ THEY REALLY BOTHERED ME AND IM SURE THEY'LL BOTHER ANYONE WHO READS YOUR STORY WITHOUT THE EDITS. :D
| who do you think i am chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
ugh. cuteness overload. a little mushy... but still cute. like man, you should've warned me before I read something super cute. and come online. now.
HAHAAHAHAHA I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THE "Hey, girlie" BECAUSE WHO CALLS SOMEONE GIRLIE ANYMORE! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. okay. ew, wrestlers have always like freaked me out. Too beefy, too beefy. I mean I like beef, but I don't like beefy boys... okay. moving on.
is this girl asian? Because she sounds kind of asian and kind of not asian... oh well who cares right? hah. and which asian girl throws parties like this! HAHHAA
HAHAHA THE WHOLE KICKING THING REMINDED ME OF POWER RANGERS. You should've had them say "It's go time."
the Asian sounds pretty cute by the way ;) I will have him. (That was not a question.)
OH and I forgot to mention- I really liked the summary! Def intrigued me :D
Ew. Romeo & Juliet. GUHROSS.
Oh man. Wonderfulness! Sorry I didn't give you any criticism.. though you probably liked that hahaha. There wasn't much wrong with this anyway. GOOD JOB DEARPANTS. SEEEE YOU ONLINE!