Reviews for Guardian Angel
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 3/14
The rhyming scheme reminds me of the Giving Tree by Shel Silverstein. The poem made me chuckle in a reminiscing way. Reminds me of the people I have lost in life whether I just lost touch with them or they died. The poem is weirdly comforting. I like the staggering of lines ending in 'ill.' It is unique.
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Nice work- lovely idea! I'm impressed by the rhyme scheme- something I can't do- but I'm wondering if it interfers somewhat?