Reviews for You Seemed Fine
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I really liked this. It was clever and really emotional. Great job, great piece. keep writing!
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Vary touching. I know what you mean, though applied to a different problem. Oh thanks for the review and fav by the way. :)
Ventracere chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Heyo. Thanks for the review on Disaster of Perfection. Thought I might stop by to read one of your poems, and this one definitely intrigues me. One thing so good about this is your ability to rhyme and the verisimilitude within it. I'm sure all of us who have read this poem have been able to relate one way or another, whether it be this scenario or another. Interesting reference to the Great Wall (D). Great job!
jk713 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Hi! Thanks for reviewing my poem and I wanted to see your writing, its really good! I really like it! And thanks again for the review, sorry I didn't log in. Too lazy.
Whitetiger2712 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
wow, sad...

looks like you have experienced this? or am i mistaken?

is there comin any more?
XxInfiniteLoverxX chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Nice poem/story/rhyme? Anyway I'll get back to you after I read your fanfiction story.