|Reviews for mushroom rain clouds|
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
"why are you so — (shh, quiet) / i want to just — (not so loud)"
| Kalopsia chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
The imagery and grammatical elements make this poem really attractive to me. I'm just a bit confused what the overall point and goal of the poem is, though. Not that I don't do the same exact thing, being abstract and surreal, in any shape or form. :P I just am curious to know more about what prompted you to write this. Mushroom rain clouds?