Reviews for Finally Free
JoyWriter10 chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
I really like the flow of this poem. It really reads smoothly

and it makes me feel like dancing. The only error I found was in

line nine, "Your Holy Fires moves" It should be "Fires move" or

"Fire moves" Either way sounds good. That part stopped me though

and I had to figure out why it didn't sound right. Keep up the

good writing!