Reviews for grapevine
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I really like the format here. Visually it's great and the flow works well too. I also like the dots before drop. That was a nice touch.

The piece is also great. I like how you describe the whole grape thing and I think people can kind of take it to mean different things which is cool. I also like the ending with the addictions part.

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iliads chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
this reminds me of a blend of spring and summer and i love it. the word choice and layout is wonderful.
classic violet chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
This is beautiful. I love the diction in this and the images I get while reading it... like a hot summer day. Lovely.