|Reviews for A Beautiful Lie|
| Creme Brule chapter 4 . 2/21/2012
Omg! lol at the end, Peru is so funny xD!
im excited to see chapter 5, what happens to Sam, Vattrine, and Carmen O:
and when I first saw Carmen I knew she was some time of Mexican-Latino-idk person. her name, teehee!
okay, such a long reveiw!
um, idk was ja ne means but I think it means bye, so, lol
| I Had To Log Out To Review chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
(Creme Brule! xD)
Yeah, that stupid -you can only review 1 chapter one, blah blah blah-
NO SPARKS? seriously, it seems like you have a LOT of sparks with this story. it's going epic
pleaaaase don't end it short! DX
And this chapter... mhh, just love. Carmen reminds me of this chic at my school.. anyway, great story so far 333
CONTINUE IT SOON 33333
| Creme Brule chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
wow, finally. I was all like 'when the heck is she going to update! the woman said every 3 days, that liar!'
Lol itll be worth the wait for chapter 3.
ILL BE WAITING 33333
| believe1nbeauty chapter 2 . 2/4/2012
lol that chapter was sickly funny! i have a feeling that Vattrine will sooner or later get busted for her english homework...
| Creme Brule chapter 2 . 2/4/2012
Secret rapist xD
lol, you write really good Make a chapter 3 RIGHT now :O (;P jus kiddin, take your time3)
I really like this chapter and the previous one. Keep it up 333333
| believe1nbeauty chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Keep updating! It's great so far!