Reviews for Relax and Breathe
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Very good piece, this is a great piece! Eveyone needs to learn to "breathe" loved this piece.
True Talker chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Yes, your mind is most definitely interesting and that is MOST definitely in a good way.
Just Kill Me Alive chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
It takes years of practice to be able to just sit back, or step back and breathe. I have tried many times and failed. The truth is, we can't look at something without criticizing it. It is a normal reaction of the human mind, but the same mind takes years to conquer. We even have thoughts at times that scare us, thinking it couldn't be our own mind that thought those exact thoughts.

I hope you carry on writing poems, I love seeing your view of life and things in general. Even death itself.

Kenny x
imightbparamore chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This is very good! Yes, I agree, we don't have too many who really know how to "breathe"

Excellent poem!