Reviews for Check the Definition
Erysimum chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Favourite lines: "I shout at / The top of my lungs / Then creep back to / My corner in / Silence." Actually, that whole passage from "Trapped in the middle of a passionate dance". I'm glad my favourite are the same as yours! :) And I like the concept of this poem, reclaiming the real meaning of the word. Screw the stereotypers :)
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
I really like this poem, it takes the very essence of how an "unstable" person feels, and describes it beautifully, covering every face of it without anything that seems redundant or unnecessary. The short sentences add to the effect, and make the pace seem almost "too fast", the way life can be too fast. Finally, it's about very real emotions that are very easily related to by readers, and described from the heart. Great job!
ToeshoeMezzo chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Finally, somebody who understands! Emo is not 'cutter', emo is 'emotional'!