Reviews for Mescaline
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Another very straight-from-the-heart poem. It's very interestingly structured, starting with a quick pace, then closer to the middle slowing down and lingering on the train speeding by, and just when it seems to be developing a solid structure, the narrator (you, I presume) wakes up. But the memory lingers. Deeply chilling. I'm very sorry for your loss.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
So simple yet so effective. I loved this, it was inspiring and you tell a story in so few words per line. Its almost like breathing!